Preface;
I ran threw the rain, drops pelting my face, but also hiding my tears of fear.
He looked normal, well, almost. His skin was white, and he had red eyes.... Over a period of time, we'd become friends. Then last night, we'd became more then friends.
I felt as though when he said those three magic words, he was my soul mate. The guy I could, and never would, let go of.
A never ending love.
But no, I was wrong. So wrong it killed me to think of what happened.
I ran threw the rain, drops pelting my face, but also hiding my tears of fear.
He looked normal, well, almost. His skin was white, and he had red eyes.... Over a period of time, we'd become friends. Then last night, we'd became more then friends.
I felt as though when he said those three magic words, he was my soul mate. The guy I could, and never would, let go of.
A never ending love.
But no, I was wrong. So wrong it killed me to think of what happened.
I risked a look back, one that I shouldn't have taken. Zane speed up at the moment I looked into his crazed eyes, and he lunged.
At my neck.
Really good! I like how good a writer you are! When I write, I either make it boring, to slow, or everything happens way to fast. LOVE IT! Continue please!
ReplyDeleteI'll write more tonight. Thanks. And, what? You're writing is amazing!
ReplyDeleteHaha, thanks. Can't wait to read the rest!
ReplyDeleteYour welcome. OH! And about that idea you mentioned the book(s), I REALLY like it. You know how you would write the first one, maybe I would write the second and THEN the 3rd one could be both of ours? I dunno...
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